The Fun Run

 

 I had learnt about the run run that there are different obstacles and they weren't the same as last year they changed them up.

I really enjoyed running around with my friends and having fun when going through the obstacles i also really enjoyed help cheering on everybody.

I should work on Making my sentences make sense and making my sentences good.

My Favorite Food

 

 

 I had Learnt about having a favorite food can be anything a takeaway or any other food like it could be juice, pasta, toast or anything like that. 

 i really enjoyed writing about the story because i make cookies with my family, friends and neighbors.

 i  think i should work on making my sentences longs  and making my sentences make sense